Monday 11 June 2012

Collaborative writing 4/4

The light under the door, shining through the dark hallway making me question wither to run or not but i here Ellie say "don't you dare think of running away." I hold my breath as she nudges me to open the door. I turned the handle and a brightness of light exploded in front of me. A pillar, in the center of the room and it looked like thousands of dogs and people sitting down facing the pillar. I had no idea why i was here and i was completely over whelmed.I follow Ellie as she leads me over to a spare seat. I sit down my hands shaking with emotion. I scan my eyes across the room. The room was enormous all of the colour of white. Rows and rows of chairs filled the space all accompanied with people and dogs sitting down chatting with one another.."This is where we all meet, soon the leader will be coming she will explain more soon" Ellie said. As i waited in confusion all of a sudden the room fell silent. Like if a feather dropped i swear you could probably here it. No one moved it looked as if everyone was statues. Then the door opened and the whole room stood up. A person walked in, a women with such great beauty it was hard not to look. A faint glow of aura was around her body then she flew up the pillar which what looked like 50meters tall. Once her feet touched the pillar the whole room stood up and bowed, i copied because i didn't know what i was suppose to do but it was almost as if i was forced to by her presence. Soon after everyone stood back down but the dogs stood standing. The women spun slowly around lifting her hands up and a glow of light poured from her hands which touched everyone's faces. My gaze turned towards Ellie the light faintly touching her face. Soon was once dog was turned into a girl. My eyes awe struck with what i just witnessed. Then when everyone was seated including Ellie a voice like an angel called out towards us. I felt her eyes focus on me then I hear Ellie urge me to stand up. I stood up slowly soon i felt all eyes staring at me.

All i remember was the woman's voice say "He is the chosen one."

Sunday 3 June 2012

3 day episode

My 3 day episode is going to be called Deserted. It's based on a group of teenagers stuck on a desert island by themselves forced to survive with the resources provided. My 3 day episode will be similar instead of on a island it would be on the beach. Students will have to be equipped and have basic skills of the wild. Each day they will be given challenges which will test their knowledge. The first day they will set up camp and will be swimming and getting use to their surroundings. Each night they will be making their own fires and cooking their own meals. The second day the activities will all be based in the water. They will also be given surfing lessons for fun. Also each day they will be given a certain amount of leisure time to hang out with friends or by themselves. The third day they will be going to the bush and will be given a map, compass and clues to find a treasure chest at the end.  Then we will pack up and head back to school.

Cost- $50-$70 depending on how many children are coming, but the money will be for food, shelter, transport and lessons.